An Upward struggle
Lara let out a gasp as she reached up for the next finger hold. She could feel the sun burning her back and shoulders, not even halfway of the climb Lara was covered in sweat. She let out a loud grunt and forced herself to keep climbing the dove white mountain. Lara could feel her back and arms aching as she struggled to keep going. Even though Lara love climbing she wasn't enjoying herself, never in her life has she climbed a mountain so steep. She could taste the saltiness of her own sweat that as it dripped down onto her lips. Straining her muscles she lunged towards the next finger hold.
Ignoring the pain that she could feel in her body she kept climbing and climbing Lara wasn't that type of person that would give up. During her struggle she heard a rumbling noise coming from her left, Lara let out a gasp as huge wall of snow came crashing down fortunately for her Lara was a safe distance away but she could still feel the impact, Lara braced herself and waited till the little avalanche stopped, she could hear the snow tumbling to the ground with a powerful impact. Lara let a shaky breath and and tried to calm herself down. She could still feel her heart rapidly beating in her chest. Lara stood still not daring to move she closed her eyes and let out a deep breath, 1 , 2, 3, 4, 5…. She counted to 10 to try and calm herself.
After a while of resting Lara decided it was a safe time to go on and start climbing.
It was victory, she did it despite the pain and danger she was faced with Lara did it.
She made it to the top of the mountain.
Here is a piece of narrative writing that I did using google docs. My narrative is about a mountain climber Lara who task was to climb to the top of the snowy mountain. The purpose for writing a narrative was to get better and hopefully use the skill that we learnt to help improve out writing and move up ti the next level.
