Working with a critical friend

Today room 6 and room 5 worked together collaboratively on our writing we had to get into pairs, someone from room 5 and someone from room 6. We worked on one partners writing test from term 4 and help them fixed there mistakes that the critical friend could see. We also looked at a rubric that tells us what we have to do to to the next level. The rubric help me by telling me what I could do to get higher marks and also realized my mistakes. My critical friend  help me by showing me my mistakes and giving me feedback.